If it could be rearranged some it could better imply that Leia was passing her Jedi journey, and not just her saber, to someone else. Plus by re-adding some removed dialogue from this edit and repositioning it, it could make it more personal for Luke and Leia with Rey. Just food for thought to help the scene some 🤷‍♂️
Luke:
“There’s something my sister would want you to have.”
Rey:
“Leia’s saber…”
Luke:
"Leia surrendered her saber to me. She told me that she had sensed the end of her Jedi path and that one day, it would be picked up again, by someone who would finish her journey.
Rey, she saw your spirit, your heart… we’ll always be with you, but this is your fight."