All of these attempts feel almost but not quite there. I think that it has to do with how he says the word ‘end’ as if it’s the final word of the sentence. The word needs a bit more attack and depth here in the middle of the sentence.
Post #1445077
- Author
- NeverarGreat
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1445077/action/topic#1445077
- Date created
- 21-Aug-2021, 12:15 PM