That’s pretty neat Sade1212! Though I do agree about the issue with the musical swell making the dialogue seem a little anti-climatic.
Quick recommendation and shameless plug- you might wanna check out this thread for many other takes at the same scene. It’s a bit of a brainstorming factory for different Rey Nobody related ideas and clips and there have been a couple editors (including Hal) who plan on plucking out the best approaches once they come to fruition to directly implement into their own edits.
Your contribution to the collection of clips would be very helpful.