I just made a quick edit of the line without any word modification and it sounds fine to my ears:
“Leia had told me that she had sensed the death of her son at the end of her Jedi path.”
I just made a quick edit of the line without any word modification and it sounds fine to my ears:
“Leia had told me that she had sensed the death of her son at the end of her Jedi path.”