Also @DZ-330 Hal has removed Finn’s line “He wanted her alive” to simplify Palp’s scheme.
Oh yeah! That’s right. Long day today 😕
I think part of why a restructure may help is that it helps with the flow of time more. Either way works though 🤷♂️
Post #1442901
- Author
- Grand Admiral Thrawn
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 5-Aug-2021, 4:42 AM