I don’t see the point of reordering these scenes, the way they are originally flow well from one to the next - the news of Leia’s death leads into Ben’s redemption (the result of Leia’s sacrifice), Poe and Finn’s scenes flow into each other and lead into Rey on Ach-to, The droid reunion leads into Rey’s signal (which gives the scene a point). Breaking this flow just makes it feel more like a collection of disjointed scenes.
Also @DZ-330 Hal has removed Finn’s line “He wanted her alive” to simplify Palp’s scheme.