Just made a quick mock-up. Here is my order:

Poe, Finn and Chewie Receive the News
Kylo Ren’s Redemption
Poe Talks to Leia & Lando
Finn Talks to D-O
Reunite & Artoo Restores Threepio’s Memory (trim out R2 reporting a signal)
Finn & Poe Talk About Occhi
Palpatine Informs Pryde (with Star Destroyer establishing shot)
Rey & Luke’s Scene
Resistance Track Rey

Link: https://vimeo.com/583203979
PW: fanedit

JEDIT: I think learning from D-O that Palp’s plan is for Rey being alive, and then the NEXT scene he talks to Pryde about Rey coming to him plays out extremely well. Then we cut to Rey deciding to go followed by the Resistance tracking her ship and following. In my opinion, it flows so much better. Hopefully y’all agree…