The proposed reordering sounds great, all the major characters are nicely introduced and get at least one big part to play making it plausible as a hypothetical first season that Lucasfilm could have been produced and released in this order.
As a nice side effect it also holds up better with canon, namely having Katuunko alive for the Ryloth arc.
Also I’m so glad to see you’re willing to take retroactive feedback from The Bad Batch to further tighten your cut!