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Post #1441643

Author
Jar Jar Bricks
Parent topic
The Last Jedi: Stoic Edition (WIP)
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Date created
28-Jul-2021, 1:47 PM

jarbear said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Also, if anyone who’s watched the workprint wants to give feedback on anything that stood out - bad or good - I’d appreciate it! There’s no pressure, if you just want to watch the workprint, but if you do want to give your thoughts on it, then I’m very happy to hear them.

I will say though, one spot that I think is a standout is removing the dialogue with Rey in the cave. Personally, it was a mistake to have Rey “explaining” things. It took me out of the scene and had me feel, nothing. No impact before he actually speaking in that scene.

By simply removing the voice over, we are now engaged. It has more impact. It’s just better. Don’t tell us what is going on, let’s feel/see it for ourselves.

I might want a link to the workprint just to experience this. I’m also curious to see how well the echoes are cleared up.

Man, if it’s flawless enough, I’d wonder why Hal or Poppa didn’t do this.