I wonder if a slight pause could help a little. Either “Leia told me that she had sense the end-- of her Jedi path” or “Leia told me that she had sensed-- the end of her Jedi path.”
It sounds like Luke is ramping up to emphasize part of the sentence and never does, with his tone changing in a way that doesn’t seem intuitive.
Post #1441484
- Author
- Hal 9000
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 27-Jul-2021, 9:55 AM