Sentence mixing it in my head, it doesn’t seem like it’d sound natural. There ought to be emphasis somewhere in the sentence, like “Leia told me she sensed the end of her Jedi path.”
This was my go at it:
Sounds fine to me!
Post #1441469
- Author
- Grand Admiral Thrawn
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 27-Jul-2021, 7:47 AM