“has journeyed” might sound a bit too verbose, I think simply “Supreme Leader Kylo Ren journeys to Mustafar” would work, and imo it sounds better than “has traveled” which always felt a bit dry to me.
Post #1440152
- Author
- Burbin
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1440152/action/topic#1440152
- Date created
- 17-Jul-2021, 4:20 PM