Cool project Faraday! Funnily enough, I actually went away from the film with the exact opposite impression: it didn’t explain enough. Luke has a good point that the Jedi are pretty bad (as demonstrated by the prequels) but doesn’t delve into that enough.
But at the same time, you’re right that doing a more detailed approach might make people think the film is actually advocating those ideas instead of the badass Jedi Luke at the end. As such, this project certainly has its place. Not sure what Testing is on about.
I actually agree with you - one of its pitfalls is that it goes into great depth on Grumpy Luke’s opinions, then doesn’t spend nearly as much time and detail rebutting them when it rejects them at the end. Cutting down the amount of the former hopefully helps to alleviate that disparity.