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Post #1439724

Author
sade1212
Parent topic
The Last Jedi: Stoic Edition (WIP)
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Date created
14-Jul-2021, 5:16 AM
Last modified
14-Jul-2021, 5:19 AM
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sade1212
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I’ve always enjoyed how much more talky TLJ is than the other two so I’m not sure the dialogue trimming is for me, but some of your more structural and visual changes seem very neat - the movie’s tendency to do a Marvel and put unnecessary humour in otherwise sincere moments is somewhat irritating - so I’d really appreciate a link when it’s done.

If Maz sent them to find DJ and then DJ betrays them, doesn’t that reflect somewhat poorly on Maz? Not that it matters in this film.