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Post #1438566

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Jar Jar Bricks
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The Last Jedi Expanded Edition by Jason Fry: The "Tragedy of Vader" Edit (v1 AVAILABLE)
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5-Jul-2021, 11:27 PM

Knight of Kalee said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Huh, I must have not understood you correctly in one of your other posts from some time ago. I’ll see about reverting it back. Any other suggestions?

Maybe not really reverting it but finding a new place for the original line? To suggest Rey wants to find her self-worth/place in the story, and also that she means to achieve that by following Luke.

Simple solution:

“The galaxy may need a legend. I need someone to show me my place in all of this. Somebody to look up to. And you didn’t fail Kylo - he failed you. I won’t.”

Or I could just put it somewhere else like you said.