So i was able to watch your edit. I do like the much more shorter film length, but i think on some scenes you could reintegrate some sources for a little more breathing and context e.g. last moment of fight between palps and mace. You establish anakin arriving without him flying to the scene (which is fine) but he standing besides maces last blow and out of the blue anakin interfering feels absurd (even though i think you tried to make him look impulsive? This didn’t worked for me).

On a technical hand, the only thing that really occurred to me were the audio transitions in ~60% of the time. Some examples:

0:37:46, before next scene and new soundtrack, there is starting another soundtrack from another scene for a brief moment
0:36:25/26, audio transition not fluent, kind of abrupt
01:04:46, same
01:27:55/56, same