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Post #1437185

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oviniboy
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
25-Jun-2021, 12:38 PM

It’s sound genuinly good, anything past that would be just perfecting and improving what’s already good.
If the “a” in the “I’m a” could be a little more clear it be better, but if it’s not possibly, it already works very well.