Oh man. This is perfect feedback Imhotep, I love this. I’m really looking forward to the forthcoming polish pass.
I won’t go into all the detail since it’s pretty universally “yes, yes, yes”. Big fan of all the crawl tweaks and your suggestions for further cuts.
I agree on Nightsisters, it does remain a little long and it is quite plot dense. I had considered splitting it into two but I think your smaller tweaks are a better idea.
Thanks so much for this level of detail!