Hey guys, I took a look at the draft, it’s really good, I really enjoyed it!

But I was wondering, unless I missed something on this thread (it’s rather long), I was thinking about the the black screen at 01.53.06 when Yoda says the children must be hidden. Is that a placeholder for a scene or is that on purpose?

Because if you need ideas to fill that gap, may I offer a suggestion? Perhaps a take of Tantive IV could be used, since Yoda, Obi-Wan and Bail are inside that ship. It could even be taken from other films. We can see the Tantive IV at 01.21.44 on this cut, and it can be seen over Scarif on Rogue One. I’m positive it makes appearances in other films too. Some image tweaking could make one of those recycled scenes look original.

If you have other ideas for that bit, just ignore me.

Good job, NFBisms! Really well done.