Agreed. I think the final paragraph works well, since Kylo is afraid not of Palpatine but of those flames of rebellion.
Post #1436339
- Author
- Hal 9000
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 19-Jun-2021, 12:31 AM