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Post #1436335

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Icecream2448
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
18-Jun-2021, 11:17 PM

Paragraph 1 - Resistance
Paragraph 2 - First Order
Paragraph 3 - Meanwhile, First Order

I see what the thought is, but this structure is kiiiiinda awkward. And definitely inferior to what it is in v1 either way. Could do some slight tweaking on the specific wording in paragraph 3 in v1 to make it clearer (meh, unnecessary) but other than that, pointless to change from our original, imo.