I’m giving out suggestions and contributing to the edit.
I’m sure u have good intentions, but might I suggest that You can give even better and more well focused suggestions if u watched it. It’s like the kid who didn’t do their homework and we are talking about the assignment that the kid didn’t read. The contributions just won’t be as fruitful.
U should read the pinned post/top of the thread if u haven’t already where Hal states it’s a constructive and does not seriously alter the story. It’s a conservative edit. That way, u know what the goal and objectives of the edit are, so one can give suggestions/contributions within the scope of the primary goals/objectives