I feel like this edit has come to far to rely on what is in the crawl now. If something is better for the sake of the story and character motivations then maybe the crawl could be changed to help those adjustments.

Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

Flames of rebellion burn across the
galaxy. The tyrannical First Order has
retaliated by silencing any planetary
system that supports their enemy.

As Rey, sole heir to the Jedi,
continues her training, General Leia
Organa sends her brave agents across the
stars to unite the disparate worlds in
the name of Resistance.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren has
traveled to Mustafar, chasing whispers of
an ancient artifact that could explain the
mysterious origins of his former master…