Yeah maybe subtle is the better way to go here. Literally one line mentioning the possibility of a spy would have saved Holdo’s character for me. So I’ll see what it looks like when I get there.
Post #1436115
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- Jar Jar Bricks
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- The Last Jedi Expanded Edition by Jason Fry: The "Tragedy of Vader" Edit (v1 AVAILABLE)
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- 17-Jun-2021, 9:52 PM