My original worry with some of the graffiti was that it was going to be too subtle for casual audience members to catch; but I think it would actually work perfectly if we can iron out the rest of the audio for this sequence. More observant viewers would be able to see that Kijimi was inspired by Luke by looking at the graffiti, and that then quietly foreshadows the moment with Poe later where it comes to the forefront; but the point of all of our additions is still made clear for those yuppies who won’t pick up on little clues like that. Kind of an /r/MovieDetails moment.
I still feel like it should be a surprise, so at first we’d feel hopeless w/ Poe and when we do get to that Zorii scene we begin to feel hopeful with Poe at the same time. You know, kind of like the Yoda reveal in ESB (before the prequels)?