Heya everyone,
Was looking for some critiques on Lando’s arrival. It’s definitely far from perfect. I have barely any remote form of editting skills. Wanted to give some bigger “feels” of the galaxy fleet arriving.
The shift in music at 1:10 is jarring, as is the faint image of Luke.
Instead of cutting back and forth between the cockpit shots and the sweeping shot of the fleet, just finish the shot of the fleet, then move onto the cockpit shots all back to back and it will flow much nicer.
I’ve toyed around with cockpit shots first, then sweeping shot or vice versa or back and forth but multiple cockpit shots. Yeah the audio has some issues, I’ll post an updated clip at some point. Thx for your feedback!