I think this is great but other the original sith eyes, this is too subtle with all the other lighting effects from the lightsabers going on. If your trying to show her tapping into the dark side then let’s be bold about it!
I’ve tweaked the eye effect to be more in line with the prequel version - a slightly red iris rim with yellow interior. It’s also more subtle. With this more subtle version I’m not sure it would read well on anything further away than this extreme closeup, so it may be unnoticeable if placed on the entire fight.
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