Thank you, all! If anyone has tips for making the dialogue sound more distant, that would definitely help. I was also thinking, I’d probably want some generic, indistinguishable chatter/shouts underneath before the final words come through clearly.
As for other things to say, maybe something like, “Remember the Alamo Crait!” Or “Remember Skywalker!” Or “For the Republic!” Something like that, perhaps?
I was also thinking, if “listen” doesn’t work out, maybe just cut that and the “Hey”?
“I don’t believe that”
Pause to listen.
From the distance: “For Skywalker!”
Would that work?