Part 1 Changelog:

Lots of trimming and making descriptions less complex. Seems like Jason Fry repeats information too many times.
Slightly adjusted the crawl (namely making only Luke Skywalker in caps)
Instead of a wooden figurine, Leia displays Han’s medal at his funeral for precise continuity with TROS
Included some vague references to dark secrets being out in the Unknown Regions, as well as some Imperials never returning from there (TROS reference)
Trimmed Poe’s prank call an appropriate amount
Restored dialogue from the film that was changed/removed for some reason
Removed the pointless scene between Rose and Paige Tico before the battle. I prefer to introduce the characters when they become relevant to the story itself.
Made countless trims to BB-8’s antics with Black One. Apparently ships have a consciousness now according to the original novelization? Not a fan.
Removed Snoke assaulting General Hux. I want to emphasize the difference between the way Kylo treats him and Snoke treats him to make his betrayal in TROS make more sense.