Part 1 Changelog:
- Lots of trimming and making descriptions less complex. Seems like Jason Fry repeats information too many times.
- Slightly adjusted the crawl (namely making only Luke Skywalker in caps)
- Instead of a wooden figurine, Leia displays Han’s medal at his funeral for precise continuity with TROS
- Included some vague references to dark secrets being out in the Unknown Regions, as well as some Imperials never returning from there (TROS reference)
- Trimmed Poe’s prank call an appropriate amount
- Restored dialogue from the film that was changed/removed for some reason
- Removed the pointless scene between Rose and Paige Tico before the battle. I prefer to introduce the characters when they become relevant to the story itself.
- Made countless trims to BB-8’s antics with Black One. Apparently ships have a consciousness now according to the original novelization? Not a fan.
- Removed Snoke assaulting General Hux. I want to emphasize the difference between the way Kylo treats him and Snoke treats him to make his betrayal in TROS make more sense.
Link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mj3tcaJQOsxfYcxPhOENUPMe7YOPditXAF-rbrn8aKA/edit?usp=sharing