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Eyepainter
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Episode III: The Eyepainter Fanedit (Released)(Trailer online)
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8-Jun-2021, 9:59 PM
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10-Jun-2021, 3:41 AM
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Eyepainter
Reason for edit
More typos

Just spent all day writing down all the changes. In total, the final running time is at 98 minutes. A total of 6 minutes’ worth of deleted scenes have been added. In total, I have removed 48 minutes from the original version. A lot shorter than I expected, but I can’t complain, since my first two fanedits are also around the 90-minute mark as well. 98 minutes is appropriate enough for my fanedits. So, without further ado, here’s the list of changes under the spoiler tag. As is the case with my previous two entries, - means deleted, + means added, and / means it’s been edited differently.

/opening crawl
-“The one crawling with vulture droids.”
-Obi-Wan, Anakin, and the clone troopers’ fight against the vulture droids
-Anakin’s attempt to save a clone
-Anakin and Obi-Wan’s missile dodges
-The buzz droids incident
-“The general’s command ship is dead ahead.”
-Obi-Wan’s leap from the ship and slicing of the first few droids
-R2 jumping out of Anakin’s ship
-Most droid dialogue and sfx(inspired by l8wrtr)
-shot of last droid’s death
-Obi-Wan giving R2 the communicator
-all of General Grievous’ coughs and wheezes
-“Just as Count Dooku predicted!” followed by evil laugh
-Obi-Wan and Anakin’s fight with the destroyer droids
-Anakin and Obi-Wan slicing up the droids in the elevator
-R2’s confrontation with the droids
-Anakin and Obi-Wan’s elevator repair episode
-Audio: “Are you alright?”
-“Count Dooku.”
-“This time, we’ll do it together.” and “I was about to say that.”
-Count Dooku’s unrealistic leap
-“Get help! You’re no match for him. He’s a sith lord.” and “Chancellor, sith lords are our speciality.”
-“You won’t get away this time, Dooku.”
-“I’ve been looking forward to this.”, “My powers have doubled since the last time we met, Count.”, and “Good. Twice the pride, double the fall.”
-Audio: “Yeah!”
-All mentions of Palpatine’s connection to the Separatists for consistency with my episode II fanedit
-“I sense great fear in you, Skywalker. You have hate. You have anger. But you don’t use them.”
-shot of Count Dooku turning his head to Palpatine
-“Kill him now.”
-shot of Dooku turning his head to Anakin
-“I shouldn’t.”
-Palpatine’s mention of Anakin’s killing of the sand people for consistency with my episode II fanedit
-“Prepare for attack!”
-“All batteries fire! Fire!”
-“R2, activate elevator 3224.”, and shot of R2 obeying the command
-All shots of R2, the clones, the neimoidians, the droids, and Grievous as the ship destabilizes
-“Oops! R2! R2! Shut down the elevator!”, and “Too late…”
/Grievous’ discovery of the jedi in the hangar bay moved to after the elevator escape
-R2 landing in the pile of broken droids
-“General, we found the jedi! They’re in hallway 328!”, and “Activate ray shields!”
-“Wait a minute…”
-R2’s zapping of the droid, followed by the droid kicking R2 down to the floor
-Audio: “We’ve been waiting for you!”, and “'Scuse me!”
-“That wasn’t much of a rescue.”, “You’re welcome.”, and “And…” followed by Grievous coughing
-“We have a job to do Anakin. Try not to upset him.”
/Obi-Wan uses the force and grabs his lightsaber from Grievous instead of R2 doing that weird distraction
-Audio: “Make them suffer!”
-“Don’t bother with them! Keep the ship in orbit!”
-Audio: “You lose, General Kenobi!”
-General Grievous’ and droid evacuations
-Audio: “Grievous!”
-Shot of R2 saying “Uh-ohhhhhh…”
-“Not to worry. We are still flying half a ship.”
-“Easy, R2!”
-One of R2’s screams upon ship landing
-“General Grievous will run and hide as he always does. He’s a coward.”, and “But…”
-Alien sound followed by Jar Jar’s “'Scuse me.”
-“Come along, R2.”
-“Well, it couldn’t possibly be as bad as all that. Now there I agree with you. In fact, I could do with a tune-up myself.”
-Anakin and Organa’s small dialogue exchange on Grievous
-“Anakin, don’t say things like that.”
-“What’s going on?”, and “Something wonderful has happened. Ani…”
-“…The happiest moment of my life.”
+Deleted scene: Obi-Wan, Mace Windu, and Yoda discuss Chancellor Palpatine
-“Moving to take control of the jedi council the chancellor is.”
-“I sense a plot to destroy the jedi.”
/“There is a massive shift in the force. We all feel it.” moved to earlier in the scene
-“Arrested?!?”
-General Grievous’ landing on Utapau and discussion with Lord Sidious
-Scene where Anakin and Padme discuss where the baby’s room will be located
-Anakin’s “actual” nightmare of Padme’s death
-Anakin walking to the living room and Padme noticing Anakin being out of bed
-“Nothing. I remember when I gave this to you.”, and “How long is it gonna take for us to be honest with each other?”
-“And?”
-“Tell me.”
-Audio: “It was only a dream.”
-“It was only a dream.”
-“Premonitions?”
-“For what? I don’t understand.”
-Audio: “How can you do this?”
-“This is outrageous! It’s unfair!”
-Jedi council’s discussion on Grievous’ whereabouts and Yoda’s decision to go to Kashyyyk
+Deleted scene: Padme’s first meeting with the rebellion
-Yoda walling to the clone troopers for his trip to Kashyyyk
-Scene where Anakin and Padme discussing their political differences and holding each other
-“…to influence the midichlorians…”
+Deleted scene: Padme’s second meeting with the rebellion
-“The capture of General Grievous will end this war.”
-Wookiee/droid battle on Kashyyyk
-Shot of Obi-Wan’s ship leaving for Utapau
-Obi-Wan’s discussion with the clone troopers and flight to Utapau
-Anakin’s second “actual” nightmare
+Deleted scene: Anakin, Palpatine, and the petition of 2,000
-“Surely, senator Amidala can be trusted.”
-“I simply don’t sense betrayal in senator Amidala.”, and “But you don’t seem to want to admit it.”
-Obi-Wan’s CGI-heavy ride
-General Grievous sending Gunray to Mustafar
/Audio: Grievous’ argument with the Separatist leaders made quieter
-“Hello there!”
/Droids raise their weapons instantly the moment Obi-Wan drops down, implying that the droids spied on him and knew he was coming
-Obi-Wan killing Grievous’ assistants
-“I’ve been trained in your jedi arts by Count Dooku.”
-Grievous’ lightsaber falling shots
-“Army or not, you must realize you are doomed.”, “Oh, I don’t think so.”
/Grievous is distracted enough by the army that Obi-Wan is able to use the force on him, hence the loss of his other two lightsabers
/Obi-Wan/Grievous confrontation re-edited into one scene
-Scene of Mace Windu sensing a plot to destroy the jedi
-“We’ve just received a report from Master Kenobi. He has engaged General Grievous.”, “We can only hope that Master Kenobi is up to the challenge.” and “I should be there with him.”
-Palpatine’s evil smile after advising Anakin to learn the ways of the dark side in order to save Padme
-“So uncivilized.”
-“Master Windu. I must talk to you.”, “Skywalker. We just received word that Obi-Wan has destroyed General Grievous. We’re on our way to make sure the chancellor returns emergency power back to the senate.”, “He won’t give up his power. I’ve just learned a terrible truth. I think chancellor Palpatine is a sith lord.”
-“How do you know this?”, “He knows the ways of the force. He’s been trained to use the dark side.”, “Are you sure?”, and “Absolutely.”
-“There is much fear that clouds your judgment.”
-CGI shot of Windu’s ship leaving
-All shots of Padme during Anakin’s walking around in the jedi council room except the last one
-“You do know, don’t you? If the jedi destroy me, any chance of saving her will be lost.”
-A few shots of Coruscant during Anakin’s rumination in jedi council room
-Shot of C-3P0 walking towards Padme
-Audio: “In the name of the galactic senate of the republic, you are under arrest, chancellor.”
-“Are you threatening me, master jedi?”, “The senate will decide your fate.”, “I am the Senate!”, and “Not yet.”
-“It’s treason, then.”
-Palpatine’s CGI-sith jump
-A few shots from Windu/Palpatine lightsaber fight
-Anakin’s landing scene
-Shot of Anakin walking towards Palpatine’s office
-“You are under arrest, my lord.”, “Anakin, I told you it would come to this. I was right. The jedi are taking over!”, “The oppression of the sith will never return. You have lost!”, “No, no, no, you will die! He’s a traitor!”, “He is the traitor!”, “I have the power to save the one you love! You must choose!”, “Don’t listen to him, Anakin!”, and “Don’t let him kill me! I can’t hold it any longer! I…I…I…I’m… too weak… Anakin! Help me! Help me! I…I…I… can’t hold on any longer!”
-“You can’t! He must stand trial!”, “He has control of both the senate and the courts! He’s too dangerous to be left alive!”, “I’m too weak! Oh, don’t kill me! Please!”, “It’s not the jedi way! He must live!”, “Please don’t!”, “I need him!”, and “Please don’t!”
-“POWER! UNLIMITED POWER!!!”
-“What have I done?”
-“I can’t live without her.”
-One of Palpatine’s “Good.” lines
-Cutaway shot of Yoda sensing the dark side
-Shots of clones fighting on Utapau
/Moved Yoda’s sensing of jedi deaths to end of Order 66 montage for maximum effect
-All of Yoda’s lightsaber moments
-Anakin’s killing of the younglings (inspired by HAL9000)
-Padme’s crying scene over the jedi temple
-Organa visiting the jedi temple, seeing the clones kill a jedi, and runaway
-Yoda’s escape from Kashyyyk and Chewbacca cameo
-Organa’s takeoff from Coruscant
-“My clone troops turned on me. I need help.”
-“Hush! Not so loud!”
-“I can’t believe that!”
-“Well, he is under a lot of stress at the moment. Take good care, my little friend.”
-R2 taking off with Anakin
-“Oh my lady, is there anything I might do?”, “No, thank you, 3P0.”, and “I…I feel so… Helpless.”
-Separatists conversation with Palpatine on Mustafar
-Obi-Wan and Yoda fighting the clones at the jedi temple
/Palpatine’s senate speech re-edited into one scene
/Yoda and Obi-Wan’s visit to the jedi temple ruins re-edited into one scene
-“Who?”
-One of Obi-Wan’s “It can’t be.” lines
-“Destroy the sith we must.”, “Send me to kill the emperor. I will not kill Anakin.”, “To fight this Lord Sidious, strong enough you are not.”, and “He is like my brother. I cannot do it.”
-“When was the last time you saw him?”, “Yesterday.”, “Do you know where he is now?”, and “No.”
-“You’re wrong! How could you even say that?”
-“…Of him… Killing younglings…”, and “Not Anakin! He couldn’t!”
-“It appears the chancellor is behind everything including the war. Palpatine is the sith lord we’ve been looking for. After the death of Count Dooku, Anakin became his new apprentice.”
-“You’re going to kill him, aren’t you?”
/Anakin killing the separatists on Mustafar moved to later and re-edited into one scene
-R2 jumping out of the ship and Anakin’s orders to R2
-“Welcome Lord Vader. We’ve been expecting you.”
-Audio: “Noooo!”
-“The war is over! Lord Sidious promised us peace! We only wanted-”
-Audio: “Oh dear.”
-Audio: “You know? I think I’m beginning to get the hang of this flying business.”
-Both shots of Obi-Wan hiding on Padme’s ship
-Anakin informing Palpatine that the Separatists are dead
-Padme and Anakin’s conversation on Mustafar
-“Liar!”
-“You have done that yourself.”
-“You will not take her from me!”
-“Only a sith deals in absolutes.”
/Mustafar lightsaber duel re-edited into one scene
-Obi-Wan and Anakin’s fight at the table
-CGI shot of lava droid Anakin is stepping on
-“I have failed you, Anakin. I have failed you.”, “I should’ve known the jedi were plotting to take over!”, “Anakin, Chancellor Palpatine is evil!”, “From my point of view, the jedi are evil!”, and “Well, then you are lost!”
-“This is the end for you, my master.”
-“It’s over, Anakin! I have the high ground!”, “You underestimate my power!”, and “Don’t try it.”
/Conversation re-edited to: “You were the chosen one! It was said that you would destroy the sith, not join them! Bring balance to the force, not leave it in darkness! You were my brother Anakin. I loved you.”, then “I hate you!”
-All of Yoda and Palpatine’s confrontation (inspired by HAL9000)
/“Tell Captain Kargye to prepare my shuttle for immediate takeoff. I sense Lord Vader is in danger.” moved to after Mustafar duel
-Audio: “Master Kenobi! We have miss Padme on board. Yes, please hurry! We should leave this dreadful place.”
-“Excuse me, Master Yoda, Obi-Wan Kenobi has made contact.”
/Padme giving birth and death re-edited into one scene
-“Medically, she’s completely healthy. For reasons we can’t explain…”
-“She’s dying!”, and “We don’t know why. She has lost the will to live.”
-Shot of Padme asleep in the hospital
/Darth Vader getting his suit re-edited into one scene
-Anakin writhing in pain
-“Is she safe? Is she alright?”, “It seems in your anger, you killed her.”, “I…I couldn’t have. She was alive! I felt it!”, and of course, “NOOOOOOOO”
/Padme’s funeral moved to after Vader asks where Padme is
-Shot of Jar Jar and the gungans
-“Master Kenobi, wait a moment. In your solitude on Tattooine, training I have for you.”, “Training?”, “An old friend has learned the path to immortality. One who has returned from the netherworld of the force. Your old master.”, “Qui-Gon!”, and “How to commune with him, I will teach you.”
-“Oh no!”
+Deleted scene: Yoda arrives on Dagobah
-Establishing shot of Alderaan