Master Lawdog (EDIT: or whoever put that shot together), good idea and shot progression. I like the intro lava and color correction. The weak spot is the TIE’s fly-by at the castle being a little choppy/unpolished. Poppa’s TIE VFX here (the fly-by over the forest) is just polished enough to really not stand out against the theatrical VFX of the TIEs approaching Mustafar. But the castle TIE fighters are not quite there yet.
EDIT: The main issue is the movement as the TIE’s are in front of the castle. Also perhaps some cloud formations/mist in the foreground could balance this out and hide imperfections.