An image can say a thousand words in any language.
I realize that you’re just presenting a humorous pic that dovetails with the topic at hand, however if that changed to Jyn Erso as a kid holding up her stormtrooper toy…that would be really awesome and could work in the edit. It would also tie into two of the characters in this movie being ex-stormtroopers.
I unironically think this cold work, i think it would convey it really well & star wars has always been full of references, so why not.