This is a huge improvement to a poor movie written by committee. The changes were great. Only tiny bit of criticism is when the line ‘human male’ gets truncated, it’s a bit of a sharp cutoff. Otherwise great work!
Post #1433803
- Author
- spottacus
- Parent topic
- Captain Marvel, hoping to make carol a bit more likeable for those who hate her. (COMPLETED)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1433803/action/topic#1433803
- Date created
- 2-Jun-2021, 12:22 AM