Oh boy, such usable feedback! Thanks so much guys.
Assassin (without Ziro, leaving the ending ambiguous) is uploading now. Then I’m going to do A Friend in Need, since that should be fairly easy, then work through all of the feedback to date. We should get a good burst of activity these next couple of weeks.
I was watching The Blockade of Ryloth and noticed at around the 29 minute mark the audio is very out of sync with the visuals, It happened on both my laptop and phone.
I’ll check that, thanks.
corruption on mandalore is labeled s02e05 and v1.0 in the spreadsheet but the linked file is named s02e04…(v0.1)?
Yes, I’ve decided to reorder those (just to better spread Ahsoka’s presence across the season) but haven’t got round to actually doing it yet. I’ll make that all clear in a specific post for it soon - probably with a bit of reordering to season one too, based on the earlier about developing Ventress.
Imhotep, I won’t give a detailed response to each of your points, suffice to say they’re all noted and I’ll run through them with my polish pass, but to be specific about a couple:
- I’ll do something extra with the bomb droids
- I’ll slightly switch up the imagery whilst Padmé walks alone
- Nice idea Imhotep (and Artan!) on the Tekla dialogue reordering.
- I know what you mean about Pursuit of Peace, I liked some of the drier politics too, but I think generally they’d put people off and that we probably should be a bit more punchy.
- I think I’ll stick with the truncated start to Umbara, even though those early fights are pretty, mainly because popcorn isn’t true sustenance! Since they’re the only real content cut, I figure that if someone really objected, they’d probably prefer the entire original quadrilogy over my edit.