I still think this might work best as a replacement for the prior castle shot rather than taking up the time of all three shots. It’s good, but its compromises are more noticeable when we have several seconds to see it play out. I’d think if we baked it into the existing three-shot structure and comped in three TIEs, we’d be all set up.
Or maybe use it to replace the first two shots. Could go for two shots’ worth of Nev’s clip, then the TIEs over forest.