Are you talking about the video cutting from the lightsaber to Rey’s face? I only did that because someone mentioned her lips reading as “all the Jedi,” so I cut the video to avoid that. I agree with you, myself - I like the pacing better without cutting the video, but that’s not a huge issue either way. (I was going to send Hal the audio, and let him decide whether to cut the video around it or not.) Just in terms of the line audio though, do you have any strong opinions of anything that stands out?
I believe sade actually stitched the shot of Rey to alter her mouth movements, so that it reads as “I’m a Jedi”, that’s what I meant works seamless/flows naturally.
As far as audio goes I don’t really have a sharp ear for issues so both sound good to me, only difference I hear is your version goes a bit faster that sade’s I think, and also there’s an audio pop on your version though that might just be the streamable compression.