I’ve been away a bit but gotta day, first the Palpy scream works. I was concerned it wouldn’t have sounded like a straight rip from ROTS but it doesn’t, so its ok in my book.
The mustafar shot with the first is fantastic. Wow! It combines everything so well.
Also for the idea Sherlock is talking about, it is interesting and the idea of a more explanation on affairs can be good if done right.