I think it works well enough. Can you please send me the audio? Ideally separate from the final clip? If you could export all channels if you added reverb, that’d let me implement and adjust further if needed.
Unaltered In-game Battlefront II audio:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1184tVRtcLDUGr70koCqUaTU_4b7z22EM/view?usp=sharing
Should be easy to make it fit, I just altered the levels to make it fade in correctly.