The close-up shot of the children looking over is a bit awkward since they look to the right, but the following action of the puppets is on the left (the walker winding up the fire), I looked at the original scene and noticed you reversed that shot, but I think now it makes more sense to leave it with the children looking left at the walker that’s about to shoot.
I don’t mind this, the alien says Skywalker and they look over at him. It’s more like they’re focused on him and what he’s doing.