Regarding a possible Plo Koon voice, I managed to put my hands on a lot of good quality lines from the old Clone Wars Adventures game. There is a line from Plo which says “You’ve shown great valor as a Jedi Knight”; it could fit both the themes of the scene and Rey’s personal arc.
I may personally vote to cut it down to just “You’ve shown great valor,” because most of the other Jedi are telling her what it means to be a Jedi, without calling her a Jedi outright. But yeah, that would work nicely!
Speaking of being a Jedi, I’ve tried doing a little more work on that climatic line. It may be better, may be worse, maybe it will sound the same as the other tests. I don’t know anymore! I used Sade’s edit to the Palpatine’s dialogue, and I also fiddled with the “[And] I’m” cut a little more (in addition to the “am a Jedi” bit).
Also, just thinking generally about Palpatine’s lines… Rey could technically respond to either “You are nothing” or “A scavenger girl…”. So basically, the only order that doesn’t work for his lines is the one they went with in the official cut. Sigh…
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Going to sleep for now, but I’ll have something else to share with y’all tomorrow…
Hmm…does this have anything to do with some form of entertainment on Pasaana, perhaps?