Sade, I think your Alt #1 flows the best, from a quick listen. Nice job!

For what it’s worth, I’m of the mind that it’s very nearly there right now. I can sort of hear the blip; but I’m also listening for the blip, and I’ve been listening to the same line God-knows how many times, so I’m a bit hypersensitive to it right now. (I actually took a break last night so that I could clear my head of it a bit.) As Sade explained, Daisy Ridley has such a unique tone in this scene that she doesn’t seem to have in many other places, which makes the line a bit difficult to replace seamlessly.

Personally, I would consider it between “passable” and “good” right now, but I understand the folks that are worried it’s not perfect. It’s definitely something I’m going to try ironing out more though!