DZ-330 said:
I think putting “you are nothing” over the silence would be a good idea as Rey would respond more quickly to saying she’s is a Jedi, which I think helps even more to remove the Endgame-ness of it. Are you able to mock that up?Sure. Here’s a mockup with “You are nothing!” shifted a little later to alleviate the awkward silence, and here’s one with it shifted all the way to the end as DZ suggests. (Edit: maybe it’s a little quiet there, but you get the idea)
I think that second one is the best application of where we could put the “You are nothing” line. However… that wide gap before the “I am all the Sith” line is a pretty big problem. If I remember correctly, I think Hal omitted the “Let this be the final word in the story of Rebellion” line from right before Palpy starts blasting. Maybe we could reinsert it in that gap?
Worst case scenario, there’s plenty of Sam Witwer lines we can cull from Battlefront II.