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Post #1430727

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David__B
Parent topic
Star Wars: The Rise Of Skywalker Redux Ideas thread
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Date created
19-May-2021, 8:05 PM

RogueLeader said:

I couldn’t find it so I did it myself real quick (maybe I did this on my own originally…)

https://streamable.com/2v2dd0

“And” being cut might be noticeable to some who are aware of the change, but I honestly believe your hypothetical first time viewer, or people who just haven’t seen the movie since release, wouldn’t even notice this change. I moved “Me” up a few frames earlier, and I think the slight shift helps sell it as well.

I like how Finn assumes it’s Ren with such conviction, only to be left not knowing what to say after Rey says it was her. I think this is the simplest way to handle it.

The only way I knew that this was edited and it originally said “and” is by reading the comments on this thread. Very good job!