For the topic about the suns, etc, I agree with Hal’s assessment: Match it to what Star Wars has shown. If it matches the style, then it’s fine.
As for the line RogueLeader showed, it’s flawless and just makes sense. I admit I have not watched Hal’s V1 nor the original movie in such a long time … I noticed nothing. So in the eyes of a first time viewer … there’s nothing that sticks out.
I agree. There’s too much focus on the minutia on this one word in this one line in this one moment, that it has very little affect on the grander picture of the movie. While I do believe there are times that they are important, after reading many pages of this thread, it’s a little excessive IMHO.
The vfx work looks incredibly stunning. Can’t wait to see how the video version turns out