Personally I think the issue is with the audio we have to work with. This edit is as smooth as it could possibly get, but the line read still sounds mumbled and rushed - an unavoidable artifact of how Daisy Ridley delivers the original line. I think this change works brilliantly in theory, but I can’t think of any other solution than dubbing in a soundalike.

I know there’s a lot of AI things out there which replicate people’s voices reading funny things (eg Alec Guinness reading the Darth Plagueis copypasta), surely it would be possible to get a Daisy Ridley one to say four words.