I’m still trying to find the best way to handle Hux, because the spy stuff doesn’t make any sense to me. In my edit, I’m planning on just cutting mentions of the spy and probably removing his death scene entirely, and that should be doable; but I was wondering if there’s any way to take it more in the direction that TLJ was hinting, namely having Hux try to overthrow Kylo? I was thinking, in the scene where Hux is like “The Knights of Ren screwed the pooch on Pasaana!”, would there be any way of inserting a new line? Something to the effect of: “Under the command of [Kylo] Ren, we suffered losses. A transport was destroyed. [We need new leadership.]” *Musical sting as we push in on Pryde* *wipe*

And then, when Hux is killed, ideally I’d want to overdub that scene so that Hux says something like “Well Pryde? Can I count on you?” *gets shot* And then Pryde says something like “Prepare the fleet to leave.”

Any ideas where that audio could come from though?