So… I’ve been working on a script for a while now that explores the backstory of Revan and is a prequel of sorts to Knights of the Old Republic. Episode 1 is 20 pages long and could be adapted into a 20+ minute short. Obviously the current version is still an early draft that is rough around the edges and requires a lot of iterative work. The core narrative is there tho. I have an entire movie worth of writing planned out with the main protagonist’s story arc (Hero’s Journey). I’d appreciate any feedback you guys could give me.

Link to the script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QIHWGlCbOVCWuQunnLh2gRfsVLiD9fOM/view

Also, figured some of you might be interested in seeing this Darth Revan/KOTOR Edit: https://youtu.be/p6IUde1aEUE