Indeed. The Lesson One scene alone almost suffocates under its own dialogue. Cut out the weed gag and Luke’s dithering about vanity and the scene might be pretty great.
Post #1429162
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- NeverarGreat
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- The Rise of Skywalker Expanded Edition by Rae Carson: The Faraday Edit (WIP)
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- Date created
- 12-May-2021, 2:17 AM