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Post #1428887

Author
EddieDean
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
10-May-2021, 7:55 PM

So, while that was rendering I looked forward to the Scipio episodes, since they feature banking drama and Clovis, which have been subjects of recent episodes.

I’m not sure how I’ll cut Scipio yet, which is fine since I don’t have to think about it for two more seasons, but the action is great and the drama is absolutely top tier, other than the actual banking stuff being fairly dry and slightly awkwardly paced. I love the scene of Jedi bobsleigh versus snowboard bounty-hunter and hope that the edit suggests it’s right to include that, though I can see myself cutting a lot of the first episode.

I do think that I can make the fireside chat of Obi-Wan and Anakin discussing Ahsoka’s absence work here, with option one being that I put that audio over dreamy visuals in a few places (to show that it’s a recent conversation that’s on Anakin’s mind), and option two being possibly reworking that audio into the scene in Anakin’s room in the Jedi temple (so that it happens properly onscreen). Though that latter scene is itself really decent, with Obi-Wan showing that he almost gets it, and alluding to his own relationship with Satine. It’ll be hard to choose which works better, so I might mockup that scene early and see what you guys think.