So here is one (of many) potential things we could do with the Star Destroyer stuff:
There is another place where I feel these establishing shots could work really well to help with the frantic pacing of this film.
I actually didn’t notice a clip was made. If there was some way you could replace the music with a slower cue, it’d work better. But unfortunately it’s still awkward placement. Perfect example of this is the Vader helmet scene in TFA. Every time I watch the film I think about how that scene has a really poor placement, and it’s similar to this. Now, on the one hand, this is better, because this Kylo scene is directly related to what’s going on with the heroes. On the other hand, it’s even shorter. But same principle.